Final Pitch Presentation
Final Feedback given by client (corrections and changes)
Feedback: Instead of making your magazine operate on a global scale, make it city centric when it expands
Correction: I will make my magazine city centric. The reason behind this is because I overlooked the fact that if it were to operate on a global scale, the majority of people wouldn't buy the magazine (which defeats the purpose of expansion) as there would be little to nothing about artists and concerts in their city. This will be done gradually by eventually expanding from North London to the entirety of London then release magazines city to city in different countries.
Feedback: Include different fonts for your magazine cover and double page spread for large amounts of texts such as Q&As
Correction: For large amounts of text I would use a font such as Times New Roman as it is easy to read due to its serifs making it easier for the reader as there would be a large amount of text
Feedback: You mentioned that there will originally not be a physical copy of the magazine as most stores wouldn't stock something that they know won't sell due to their not being a large amount of people that would read the magazine early on. However this goes against the brief. What would you do to fix this?
Correction: At first, the only physical copies of my magazine will be distributed through subscriptions people would have made to have the physical copy of the magazine delivered to their homes
Feedback: Ensure that your magazine will only be available on Kindle Fires instead of all Kindle platforms as they are the only ones with colour.
Correction: I disagree with this because when people with no Fire Kindles will be purchasing my magazine, they would most likely already be aware that it won't show colour. Due to this, and because it will ensure more digital copies are being sold, it would not hurt me to make it available on ordinary Kindles.
Feedback: It would be nicer if in your presentation, when you used people for your magazine, that they would look like people that would actually read your magazine
Correction: If my presentation was needed to be shown again, I will edit the pictures so that they would all represent a person that would look like he is interested in Indie Rock.
Correction: At first, the only physical copies of my magazine will be distributed through subscriptions people would have made to have the physical copy of the magazine delivered to their homes
Feedback: Ensure that your magazine will only be available on Kindle Fires instead of all Kindle platforms as they are the only ones with colour.
Correction: I disagree with this because when people with no Fire Kindles will be purchasing my magazine, they would most likely already be aware that it won't show colour. Due to this, and because it will ensure more digital copies are being sold, it would not hurt me to make it available on ordinary Kindles.
Feedback: It would be nicer if in your presentation, when you used people for your magazine, that they would look like people that would actually read your magazine
Correction: If my presentation was needed to be shown again, I will edit the pictures so that they would all represent a person that would look like he is interested in Indie Rock.
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